Comment on Loyalty Unyielding, a Melkor/Sauron fic by FlyingCarpets
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I read this and other chapter o the fic! I find it very funny but also make me think about them, I love it!!
I am sorry for my english for not explain in a better way..
I read this and other chapter o the fic! I find it very funny but also make me think about them, I love it!! I am sorry for my english for not explain in a better way..
Oh my, we are so very happy to hear that you liked it this much! :3333333 
And thank you for commenting, we love to hear what people think about the story! <3 We'll submit 6th chapter probably around friday/saturday and we hope you'll keep enjoying it <3! Thanks so much!
(and don't worry about your english, you communicate everything very clearly, and the more you read/write the better you'll get, the most important thing is to keep practicing and you are not afraid to use english /practice so it's great <3)
And thank you for commenting, we love to hear what people think about the story! <3 We'll submit 6th chapter probably around friday/saturday and we hope you'll keep enjoying it <3! Thanks so much! (and don't worry about your english, you communicate everything very clearly, and the more you read/write the better you'll get, the most important thing is to keep practicing and you are not afraid to use english /practice so it's great <3)
Thanks Yes, I like it, especially the part where Sauron decides to pass on the side of Melkor, his motives. Is a funny story but also a deep and thought-provoking.
Yes, I like it, especially the part where Sauron decides to pass on the side of Melkor, his motives. Is a funny story but also a deep and thought-provoking.Yes, we began it a little on the funny side but as you yourself noticed already - it grows rather serious and there is sadness and epicness still ahead before it ends. So many things are left unspoken in Silmarillion and motivations are often left unexplained (or just hinted) that is is very interesting to think on how to fill those gaps, while still remaining true to the story and the characters. And there was so little fanfiction written about those two! So we're very happy that we managed to write an interesting, thought-provoking story <3 Thank you for reading it, you're awesome!
Thank to you! It is true, in the Silmarillion many things are not told, in fact it is known that it is a story told by the elves, the good, by the victors. Is interesting to hear the point of view of the enemy, his reasons. I look forward to the rest of the story!