Lamb-Charmer's avatar
Well, no need to thank me =P

Anatomy is rather easy so it should not be a problem for you :)

You improve with each new drawing you make. That's why drawing is so fun :D

Hmmm so the girl here isn't Theliane?
Tori-Fan's avatar
thanks a lot i'm glad if can notice that i improve, i have lot of fun drawing and getting some self confident so ^^ !!! ^0^

Nah i know she look like Theliane but it's not her, i have difficulty drawing char different, even more since i decide this girl would have red hair before create Theliane XD!

i posted a try of comic page (it's a wip though ^^ need to color and redo typo :3) with Theliane and those two hero :3

if you want to see^^ [link] !
Lamb-Charmer's avatar
Hmm, change her hairstyle maybe? I thought it was Theliane becouse of the goggles though :)

The comic page looks really good :D
It's awesome that you have the courage to put it up (I remember I've done one like 4 years ago but it was bad XD)
If you post up more then be sure to let me know ;)
Tori-Fan's avatar
Yeah i thought about this, but i'm not sure i want to change those hairstyle, i have to think about : < Somehow when i draw a char of me, i have to struggle for make me change the anatomy/face/hairstyle : <

Thank you for comic page! ^^
I think myself this comic isn't good, the blabla is cheesy and voila, dunno, i just put heart on so thought people who follow me would have seen it, also it's first time i make character speak and interact like this on a full page/scene, so i wanted share it^^

But you should post your comic page too, it's so interesting to see char being alive on some page! ^^

I doubt i'll do lot more of comic page for now, i try to think about maybe start something in january, i still try to think about .. will see^^

thanks for your interest : ) it give me courage!
Lamb-Charmer's avatar
Well practice is the key ;)

It looks good.
The blabla XD can be corrected if you dont like it.
It's great for your first comic.
Waiting to see more :D

Nah, I got rid of it with most of my older drawings.

Don't force yourself ;)

No problemo =P
Tori-Fan's avatar
haa :( this is too bad you tossed old drawings ._. .. even more serious project like comic ._.;

have to sketch the second page, who show the famous gnathia city, but let's say i decided to focus on something else for now, so will prolly take sometime ^^...

but thanks a lot for cheer! : )
Lamb-Charmer's avatar
It wasn't serouos at all, it was just for fun. Even so I remodeled most of my characters anyway.

Yeah drawing cities in detail can be painfull.

That's why I'm here :D