Comment on FP: two by MioneBookworm

The grammar's a bit off, but your a wonderful storyteller. Here's a tip. You know how you put whatever people are saying in apostrophes: 
'To annoy mother, mostly,' Sirius replied, which made James chuckle, and Amanda frown.
You should change the apostrophes to quotation marks:
"To annoy mother, mostly," Sirius replied, which made James chuckle, and Amanda frown.