Comment on DMC4 Luxuria - page 26-27 by Telikor
Her slowly dawning awareness of the last page was just but the mildest teaser for her reaction here. Although al the details on the face showing surprise are great,I think I like the little jagged surprise markers you drew above her head. I think that really conveys the sorta lulled, sluggish response because of her drugging that she has. Also shows that despite her classy sexy body and bob cut, Luxuria just doesn't look dignified when she's caught off guard like that 
That monster is a beauty, and Luxuria just realized it was her date for the day!
That monster is a beauty, and Luxuria just realized it was her date for the day!
Yes, I was afraid that the scale of the monster wasn't clear enough, so I draw some birds in front of it to show it was at a distance.
That's perfectly fine. I think it gives the monster a sense of scale. Really adds to it's awe,and explains Gloria's reaction!