Hmhmhmhm, it's wonderful how others can see things you may miss and inspire you more
It's great how you included those little nuances without realizing it: Mowgli's wildness (sun-darkened skin, long free hair, bigger muscular frame, impulsive and open) vs Jim's civilness (light skin, short cropped hair, slim toned frame, imaginative and shy); it even gives a message that the wild and the civilized can coexist in harmony :3