Comment on How To: Making a Transformers OC by One-For-Sorrow
Well i had idea for 2 tranfromers characters actually Jetwing and Airline, even ig the gap of age is quite big between them even for transformers(Jetwing is actually older even than Megatron or Optimus Prime when Airline is more or less about Bumblebee age), they're siblings(was thinking of turning them inot Jetfires relatives, yet not very sure of this idea), ok making this in the way presented up here.
Autobot(formelry Neutral): Jetwing
Alt-mode: F-14 Hornet
Color Scheme: dark green and sand yellow(optics color light green)
Weapons: dual swords and arm-mounted light blasters
Combat-Style: mostly melee fighting based on speed and agility combined with short range shooting
Personality: Calm and sedat during battel, never underestimating his foes, he's always trying to minimaze the looses on his side, what often causes him to take a lone fight so he don't have to care about others(this is his most preferd way of operating, but depite that he's quite decent comander), in social life he is rather introvertic, not talkign much to others, usually trying to be friendly if he alreayd dose so, but willign to use retorts and mean jokes if somebody offends him. Also it's very hard to make him angry, yet if he is angry he becomes very mean and offensve, also this is only state when he's up to make some rash actions(also here goes a small funny fact when he's talking with female characters, other than his sister Airline he acts in a shy manner, not so shhy to become speachless yet he becomes much less willing to be mean to others, displaying more patienceto offenses than normally)
Function: Seeker-CyberNinja mix
Skills: Can fly in his robot mode(after transformation his wings are set on his back in forming some sort of glider and jet engines becoming parts of his lower legs)
Weaknes: Slow-down attacks, as his combat style is based on speed and agility, when he gets slowed down situation becomes dangerous for him, even then he's smart enought to find a way to defeat his enemies, yet it is way much harder than usual
Relationships
Airline: His younger sister, he spent a lot of time rising her up and teaching her everything he knows, even if he made sure that she is more able to take care of herself(curently she's as good in combat as he or might be even better) he still displays a lot of care of her sometimes more than needed
Megatron: His nemesis, probqaably he's more willing to kill him than Optimus, as he considers him a traitor, who should be punished with death for all crimes against Cybertron
Optimus Prime: Jetwing knew Optimus back in form of Orion Pax, back then they shared many notions, mostly fact that Opptimus is leader of Autobots convinced Jetwing to join them
Backstory: Well i'll write it later as his and Airline stories are strongly connected
Autobot:Airline
Alt-mode: F-30 Raptor
Color Scheme: white with light orange(was thinkign of light blue or light green but i tihnk this might be better combo also optics color: ultramarine)
Weapons, function and combat style mostly the same as Jetwing(will explain it more in backstory)
Personality: during battle she's also calm and sedat, not as good in comand as her brother but she often likes to splurge with her skills, yet she never let it turn into unnecessary risk, in social life she is storngly extrovertic and hyperactive, she just loves to talk with people, listening to their stories, making new friends and trying new activities to fill her free time.
SkillsL she can also fly in her robot mode(in her case jet engines together with wings are forming a jetpack on her back)
Visusal: Unlike other jetfighter tranfroers she dosne' use planes cockpit as chestplate, instead she's usieng the windshield of it as a headdres partially covering her face
Weaknes: Simillary like Jetwing her fighthing sstyle is also based on speed and agility, and lack of these makes her much weaker.
Relationships:
Jetwing: he was rising her since he andd Jetfire found her, even if she's sometimes annoyed with him taking so much care of her, she actually can barelly imagine how her life woudl look like if not his care, help and training
Ok so now this is going to be long story.
So it all started back at the Cybetron, Jetwing was one of 1st created Battlecons(which later became Decepticons) and a prototype of flying unit, he s very proud of his role as a protector of Cybertron, and he felt very honored tha he can serve as such. some time layter newer Battlecons have been produced yet he remaond as best fighter among them, yet he never asked for promotion to higer ranks, what actually caused Quintessons who were responsible for Battlecon project to create a unit that could became such comander, Megatron. At the beginign everything seemed fine yet after some time Jetwing found out that Megatron isn't willing to remain loyal to his creators. When Megatron was convincig other Battlecons to rebel agaisnt their masters and claim what belongs to them Jetwing responded to him by challenging him for duel. Even if emgatron was usieng sdirty tricks he wasn't able to defeat Jetwing, and lost this duel. After this Jetwing decided to desert out from the Battlecon squad and became a freelancer. Some time after this Megatron thre out his uprising and started war with Autobots. For a long time Jetwing remiand neutral warrior, fighting only when he had to, even then as he had no mercy for Decepticons , as he considered them traitors, he was avoiding fight with Autobots, usually fighthing only to escape them, as he still was willing to remain their protector. One day during one of such situations he met Optimus who todl all his allys to lowe their weapons and don't start fight. Recognising in him his old firend Orion Pax, Jetwing decided to follow him oficially join Autobots. Some time later during one missions he found a track of one of the Quintessons who was his creator, following it he has found a capsule with newly created female Battlecon. he also found some logs that she was based of his desing, perfected vertion of warmachine he was prototype of, and last of her kind as the Quintesson who created her was long dead. After she awaken, he decided to take care of her, learning her everything she knows, training her so she might be apeble fo fighting on her own. Doing so he storngly established her moral spine, what made her even more loyal to Autobots cause than he was expecting.
Ok thats all about them i would love to see artworks of them as i'm not good enought in graphics to make such on my own, also wouldn't mind them apearing in someones seires/comic, but not without my agreement.
Autobot(formelry Neutral): Jetwing
Alt-mode: F-14 Hornet
Color Scheme: dark green and sand yellow(optics color light green)
Weapons: dual swords and arm-mounted light blasters
Combat-Style: mostly melee fighting based on speed and agility combined with short range shooting
Personality: Calm and sedat during battel, never underestimating his foes, he's always trying to minimaze the looses on his side, what often causes him to take a lone fight so he don't have to care about others(this is his most preferd way of operating, but depite that he's quite decent comander), in social life he is rather introvertic, not talkign much to others, usually trying to be friendly if he alreayd dose so, but willign to use retorts and mean jokes if somebody offends him. Also it's very hard to make him angry, yet if he is angry he becomes very mean and offensve, also this is only state when he's up to make some rash actions(also here goes a small funny fact when he's talking with female characters, other than his sister Airline he acts in a shy manner, not so shhy to become speachless yet he becomes much less willing to be mean to others, displaying more patienceto offenses than normally)
Function: Seeker-CyberNinja mix
Skills: Can fly in his robot mode(after transformation his wings are set on his back in forming some sort of glider and jet engines becoming parts of his lower legs)
Weaknes: Slow-down attacks, as his combat style is based on speed and agility, when he gets slowed down situation becomes dangerous for him, even then he's smart enought to find a way to defeat his enemies, yet it is way much harder than usual
Relationships
Airline: His younger sister, he spent a lot of time rising her up and teaching her everything he knows, even if he made sure that she is more able to take care of herself(curently she's as good in combat as he or might be even better) he still displays a lot of care of her sometimes more than needed
Megatron: His nemesis, probqaably he's more willing to kill him than Optimus, as he considers him a traitor, who should be punished with death for all crimes against Cybertron
Optimus Prime: Jetwing knew Optimus back in form of Orion Pax, back then they shared many notions, mostly fact that Opptimus is leader of Autobots convinced Jetwing to join them
Backstory: Well i'll write it later as his and Airline stories are strongly connected
Autobot:Airline
Alt-mode: F-30 Raptor
Color Scheme: white with light orange(was thinkign of light blue or light green but i tihnk this might be better combo also optics color: ultramarine)
Weapons, function and combat style mostly the same as Jetwing(will explain it more in backstory)
Personality: during battle she's also calm and sedat, not as good in comand as her brother but she often likes to splurge with her skills, yet she never let it turn into unnecessary risk, in social life she is storngly extrovertic and hyperactive, she just loves to talk with people, listening to their stories, making new friends and trying new activities to fill her free time.
SkillsL she can also fly in her robot mode(in her case jet engines together with wings are forming a jetpack on her back)
Visusal: Unlike other jetfighter tranfroers she dosne' use planes cockpit as chestplate, instead she's usieng the windshield of it as a headdres partially covering her face
Weaknes: Simillary like Jetwing her fighthing sstyle is also based on speed and agility, and lack of these makes her much weaker.
Relationships:
Jetwing: he was rising her since he andd Jetfire found her, even if she's sometimes annoyed with him taking so much care of her, she actually can barelly imagine how her life woudl look like if not his care, help and training
Ok so now this is going to be long story.
So it all started back at the Cybetron, Jetwing was one of 1st created Battlecons(which later became Decepticons) and a prototype of flying unit, he s very proud of his role as a protector of Cybertron, and he felt very honored tha he can serve as such. some time layter newer Battlecons have been produced yet he remaond as best fighter among them, yet he never asked for promotion to higer ranks, what actually caused Quintessons who were responsible for Battlecon project to create a unit that could became such comander, Megatron. At the beginign everything seemed fine yet after some time Jetwing found out that Megatron isn't willing to remain loyal to his creators. When Megatron was convincig other Battlecons to rebel agaisnt their masters and claim what belongs to them Jetwing responded to him by challenging him for duel. Even if emgatron was usieng sdirty tricks he wasn't able to defeat Jetwing, and lost this duel. After this Jetwing decided to desert out from the Battlecon squad and became a freelancer. Some time after this Megatron thre out his uprising and started war with Autobots. For a long time Jetwing remiand neutral warrior, fighting only when he had to, even then as he had no mercy for Decepticons , as he considered them traitors, he was avoiding fight with Autobots, usually fighthing only to escape them, as he still was willing to remain their protector. One day during one of such situations he met Optimus who todl all his allys to lowe their weapons and don't start fight. Recognising in him his old firend Orion Pax, Jetwing decided to follow him oficially join Autobots. Some time later during one missions he found a track of one of the Quintessons who was his creator, following it he has found a capsule with newly created female Battlecon. he also found some logs that she was based of his desing, perfected vertion of warmachine he was prototype of, and last of her kind as the Quintesson who created her was long dead. After she awaken, he decided to take care of her, learning her everything she knows, training her so she might be apeble fo fighting on her own. Doing so he storngly established her moral spine, what made her even more loyal to Autobots cause than he was expecting.
Ok thats all about them i would love to see artworks of them as i'm not good enought in graphics to make such on my own, also wouldn't mind them apearing in someones seires/comic, but not without my agreement.