SKaRTeH's avatar
Does that include spelling complementary wrong in the description? Babooow!

As for in the piece I've found:
Hair, 3rd section you used "Pallet" meaning "Palette"
Scene, 3rd section before end you used "Accept" in the context of "Except"

Thats all I can find and I doubt theres more. I didn't really check grammar cuz you typed too much spelling was easier to check :D not that it was spelling as such just stuff that the spellchecker wont pick up.

Tips section is great that could be a submission on its own.
AdRoiT-Designs's avatar
aww hell no!!! so many mistakes! thanks for checkin em for me bra!
SKaRTeH's avatar
Hahaha no prob but damn it took ages you wrote too much :p
AdRoiT-Designs's avatar
haha yeah man it is around 1,500 words