Does that include spelling complementary wrong in the description? Babooow!
As for in the piece I've found:
Hair, 3rd section you used "Pallet" meaning "Palette"
Scene, 3rd section before end you used "Accept" in the context of "Except"
Thats all I can find and I doubt theres more. I didn't really check grammar cuz you typed too much spelling was easier to check
not that it was spelling as such just stuff that the spellchecker wont pick up.
Tips section is great that could be a submission on its own.