Comment on Taking responsibility - Part 3 by hippo2
This group will start to fall apart when Martha comes out and realizes David didn't want to help her so quickly.
That's for the reader to decide.
Ah, an interactive choice? I know what I'm leaning toward.
As I already explained, the final stories will be an interactive story. On several occasions, you'll have to choose the paths. You aready did by either bringing Babette back from SSU or not. And you also had to decide whether to turn the earrings back into a girl or not. Each time you got a codeword for your desicion. And these codewords will decide on the future course of the story.
Care to tell me what you are leaning toward?
Care to tell me what you are leaning toward?
I'm leaning toward David paying for not helping Martha when he easily could have. Have him driven away or be considered unworthy of Martha's friendship.
Because seriously, that was a jackass move to do in return for Martha trying to do the right thing.
Because seriously, that was a jackass move to do in return for Martha trying to do the right thing.
Then you have to choose "Martha's genie side wins" when the choice is up.
I mean Sami.
Well that would be a very permanent lesson. How should Sami punish him?
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I think I might. I usually put myself in the character's situation when I want to know what happens next. And if I was Martha, and I figured out David could have easily helped but decided to teach me a "lesson", I would get so mad I'd tell him to leave and never come back. Or maybe tell David to teach HIM a lesson.