Great idea. I like how Miskit is just PINK PINK PINK ALL DAY EVERYDAY xD Anyway, The only bad think I can find is a few punctuation errors (i.e. 'Can I help you" should have had a question mark at the end of it, and a few of the sentences didn't have periods at the end of them), but seeing as you wrote this in the middle of the night, I can't blame you xD All in all, it's awesome and I can't wait for chapter two!