Comment on The Origin of Laughing Jack by SnuffBomb
Im sorry the story didnt meet your standards and furthermore sorry you wasted your christmas eve trying to decipher a short story on the internet. I hope you enjoy the feeling of intellectual superiority of finding a small plot hole in an online short story. kinda a moot point in the long run, hell even I know this story isnt much more than palatable. I guess most people liked it because normally when people absorb media they dont go searching for small mistakes to get pissed off about. But hey whatever. You win man. Merry Christmas.
I don't mean to complain, but I just think this story is too sad. I'm sorry, but since you are the one who wrote this, I must ask, could Laughing Jack EVER become good again or is he eternally corrupted and evil? just know, no offense, that if he is ruined permanently, that will probably crush my spirits with him, but I've gotta know. although, for the record, I like to believe he could be redeemed. I want to know the truth, but at the same time, I like to hope he could see the light again. sorry, for rambling, I just feel very strongly about how Laughing Jack in this origin story seems more like a tragic, forced into villainy type of character. thank you for taking the time to read my comment. I appreciate it.
I nit-pick what can I say? No ones perfect and we all make mistakes. I didn't point the plot holes out to be superior I did it to let you know about your mistake so you can see what you missed so if you write another story like this you won't make the same mistake again. There's no need for your attitude just because someone finds something wrong with your story,it's called being honest and since you see something wrong with the story that means you know you can do better. Anyway I said all I needed to say,Merry Christmas and have a happy new year.