Comment on schizophrenia? by crooked-clockwork
Merci, ah, you flatter me. 
Would you please check out my poetry ( started doing it today) and tell me your thoughts/suggestions? I want to get as much input as possible so I can get better 
I do because you deserve it , I try to write a poem about this kind of thing and it fails
Sure. I'm sure you don't fail.
In my new poem, I added punctuation just for you. :L