Comment on Chakra -B.O.T. Page 160 by ARVEN92

The line ‘especially the one who switch sides’ seems really unnatural to me. Kinda like on the previous page... but now that it’s repeated it really stands out. And for me it doesn’t really explain the reason behind his anger. Or rather... I don’t like the fact that you shove that info right into our face. I assume he doesn’t trust ‘those who switch sides’ because in the past he’s bean betrayed and all that, so I think the readers would be smart enough to deduce that from the story without it being exposed twice. Additionally this ‘doesn’t trust brings another question: Why? Sure, switching sides is bad, but why does he react so aggressively to it?

So I think the dialogue would have more natural flow if you put  that info after the flashback. To maybe summarize Hielo’s story.