Comment on My OC by awesome992

luxidoptera's avatar
I would say "good basedolling", but there are a lot of things that need to be fixed here...

:bulletred: Practice drawing manes yourself; the premade manes give no practice and really just make you look lazy.
:bulletred: Please stay away from the MS Paint default colors. They are easy to recognize to the trained eye, and look very ugly. Try using the Custom Colors feature a lot more.
:bulletred: I also recommend changing his name; Awesomely Green isn't a good name for a character. How about Awestruck Green? It rolls off the tongue better and generally sounds better as a name, while still being essentially the same name.

So overall, needs some work. The character has a lot of potential, but the mistakes you made really do not help. If you'd like, I can try making a design for him myself.

Takane Enomoto (No love interest) [V7] 
awesome992's avatar
Thanks ill work on re drawing it