NOPE! Can't read it anymore!
Too painful!
As I came from an mlp story site, his character is absolutely abysmal, and the only solution is to kill it with fire.
He hits nearly every, if not all the bad signs of an mlp gary/mary sue.
I mean, sure the art's good, but if you're going to write a story from that art, and make it something of a different form of art, and make so many mistakes... You shouldn't be writing.
And the compliments... No. Simply no.