Rotorix's avatar
He sounds like a very, very, very bad Gary-su. One of his so-called "weaknesses" isn't even a weakness. What the hell is the point of putting a horn on him if he can't use magic? Why... What... My god, it hurts!
DJP15's avatar
It does hurt, even more so when you see some of the comments people put ><
Rotorix's avatar
Please,oh please, don't tell me people think he's a good character? 
DJP15's avatar
Go take a read on the link lol answers lie ahead
Rotorix's avatar
NOPE! Can't read it anymore!
Too painful! 
As I came from an mlp story site, his character is absolutely abysmal, and the only solution is to kill it with fire.
He hits nearly every, if not all the bad signs of an mlp gary/mary sue. 
I mean, sure the art's good, but if you're going to write a story from that art, and make it something of a different form of art, and make so many mistakes... You shouldn't be writing. 
And the compliments... No. Simply no.