Ah, that's ok. At least you popped by. And you submitted something lovely! hehe
And yeah, I noticed the brightness of it. You should not be frightened though! It's good! But the color set you had in mind sounds very pretty as well. Hmm.
Improved? I don't know if I have that much. I did finally post a few things. And I personally liked how my drawings turned out, but I will never be as good as you!