what makes you think its mary sue ?
This Character's personality :
- cheerful
- happy
- loves to cheer and play, and go out to party
- dependent on others to survive because she's inexperienced.
- sometimes may not understand consequences of her action
i just don't see why the qualities above is a stereotypical Mary Sue.. this is actually Archetype based from Greek goddess Persephone... if you think she's a dumb blonde like one you get from Dean Yeagle's Mandy Characters, you're greatly mistaken...
This Character's personality :
- cheerful
- happy
- loves to cheer and play, and go out to party
- dependent on others to survive because she's inexperienced.
- sometimes may not understand consequences of her action
i just don't see why the qualities above is a stereotypical Mary Sue.. this is actually Archetype based from Greek goddess Persephone... if you think she's a dumb blonde like one you get from Dean Yeagle's Mandy Characters, you're greatly mistaken...
No, it isn't its character though in one I it appeared the rights: "dependent on others to survive because she's inexperienced" - thanks for confirmation of my arguments. Why it is similar? She loves the Smokescreen, and as it is visible, lives with team of autobots. These are Mary Sue's main signs. And still vision of the author by her sexual princess, but here is already fine, a disputed issue. The main thing is two factors from the previous offer. Design as obvious (I don't mean a good 3D model).
She does have a back story that tell who she is. She doesn't just "live" with the autobots. Smokescreen first met her on cybertron when he was put on Data board review with her for a little as an excuse to leave the hall of records for a little bit. That was the first time they met. He would occasionally notice her in the hall getting some stats and energy levels to add to her review for that cycle. He would show off to her during those times. Eventually, he stopped seeing her. That was where her back story kicked in where she was placed on a research team and they ended up in a whole other star system. After Cybertron's revival, Solar and her research team traveled back to Cybertron.
Solar can fight, but she's prefers not to. Not her style. Wheeljack is not fond of her though because he thinks she's just soft. Solar is willing to fight if it is in defense of something. She has basic training, but nothing more. Solar does have a happy personality. She's is very intelligent though. She is often mistaken for someone who has no experience and knowledge because of her physical form and personality. But the reason why she chooses to be with smokescreen a lot is because he knows how she feels. He was underestimated a lot when he entered Team Prime. Solar also is NOT part of Team Prime. Her loyalties are to her team and to the Autobots.
Also, there is one thing everyone should understand. Every type of character has already been created.
Solar can fight, but she's prefers not to. Not her style. Wheeljack is not fond of her though because he thinks she's just soft. Solar is willing to fight if it is in defense of something. She has basic training, but nothing more. Solar does have a happy personality. She's is very intelligent though. She is often mistaken for someone who has no experience and knowledge because of her physical form and personality. But the reason why she chooses to be with smokescreen a lot is because he knows how she feels. He was underestimated a lot when he entered Team Prime. Solar also is NOT part of Team Prime. Her loyalties are to her team and to the Autobots.
Also, there is one thing everyone should understand. Every type of character has already been created.
Here it is the text)))). Thanks for an explanation. Simply I already threw information on it in one community and there the majority confirmed that it is Mary Sue. She nevertheless not such hope as looks outside. Excuse if suddenly I offended, everyone has the opinion. In my purposes wasn't to offend.
so you're saying that depending on others to survive because the character is inexperienced and possibly young is wrong value to put in a characters ? what's wrong with it ? because that's sounds perfectly human to me... that's the quality of an adolescence character... 
perhaps the only thing that make her have mary sue quality is because she was paired with smokescreen.. that's all.. if she was paired, maybe with another OC, then i think it is all fine.. ( her being Autobot or Decepticon or live with them doesn't contribute to mary sue quality... )
perhaps the only thing that make her have mary sue quality is because she was paired with smokescreen.. that's all.. if she was paired, maybe with another OC, then i think it is all fine.. ( her being Autobot or Decepticon or live with them doesn't contribute to mary sue quality... )
About the first I didn't understand, excuse. As I wrote here not only the love matters. I showed many other this character and only it was pleasant to units. All pointed to participation in Mary Sue especially as it is specified in the text and in works. Anyway I hope that only seemed to me that she is Mary Sue.
what i mean is that, you said "having character that is dependent to other because he/she is inexperience is a sign of mary sue.", therefore it is wrong. but i just don't see why is it wrong.. its completely normal and logical to be dependent on others when you're inexperience.