Still wonderful. I like it, especially the play with the parentheses. My favorite line was
"we swallow blues instead
of talking them out."
I also, again, like the
"boys counting
rib(cage)s & (de)composing"
It says a lot, paired with the line before it. <3
"we swallow blues instead
of talking them out."
I also, again, like the
"boys counting
rib(cage)s & (de)composing"
It says a lot, paired with the line before it. <3
Thank you so much. Those lines in particular meant a lot to me, so I'm quite glad you liked them. 