Comment on P.11 Cramps by Enock
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Awesome page as always Enock^.^ Is it just me or does Karin look really beautiful here *_* Feel sorry for Naruto though...
I love Halloween too but too bad they don't celebrate it in our country
Sorry for nitpicking but I see a few errors in this one...
1st panel- I think It should go livke this "I 'have' also been feeling guilty and 'ashamed'of myself for doing things I shouldn't do."
2nd panel- I'm not sure regrate is a word. Did you mean regret?
3rd panel- It's spelled as Hokage
4th panel- It's Karin not Krain. I'm pretty sure its just a typo.
Again sorry for being nitpicky >.< but your comic will be even more Awesome without any grammatical errors
I love Halloween too but too bad they don't celebrate it in our country
Sorry for nitpicking but I see a few errors in this one...
1st panel- I think It should go livke this "I 'have' also been feeling guilty and 'ashamed'of myself for doing things I shouldn't do."
2nd panel- I'm not sure regrate is a word. Did you mean regret?
3rd panel- It's spelled as Hokage
4th panel- It's Karin not Krain. I'm pretty sure its just a typo.
Again sorry for being nitpicky >.< but your comic will be even more Awesome without any grammatical errors