Comment on Gloom II by Candra

Yes, it´s very good. Although the stetics in it seems off. I see it and i feel more into the line of Royo's Tatoo series than in the cenobyte realm. He (at least it looks like a he) seems only posing, not promising and menacing and this passivity, if it is intended, ought to be acompanied with suffering and lust.
I just don´t see it.

Also, he could use something more grotesque in the face.