Comment on The Chase by Ladygentlemanbastard
Wow, this blew me away. Very good and it transitions through the story so well for the challenge you had. It was very intriguing for its length and leaves you wanting more or at least imagining the various possibilities. Very well done! 
Eek, thank you very much for the kind words! I loved the challenge and am glad that I was able to do so much in so little space. 