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 You're most welcome, Samantha ^_^ . And, I think it's a nice touch, him reading DA TG stories :) . I'm also happy to hear that we have the enjoyment of that story, in common.  I will continue to look forward to hearing more of this tale :) .  I'm also intrigued by the possibility that we might find a bit more about Jason's psychological motivation(s) for dressing up (maybe as a part of his inner-monologue?). 

"I didnt want to complicate matters"...

Meh, 'fair enough, I suppose (shrugs) :) . You make good points. I'm just trying to figure out what he could have struck his head on, while standing, and then succeeded on having the happy landing of his sister's bed, ha ;) . Maybe a wall next to the bed (shrugs again)?
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Reading the D.A. stories make him feel not alone and part of a family, much like it does with me.

How would I write his inner feelings? In brackets?

He was standing in his sisters highest heels, thats what made him fall.
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 That's cool, as a detail :) . And, I can certainly sympathize with that/those feelings.

Nah. I think how you currently mention his thoughts, works just fine.

LOL. I get that much. It's just my mind trying to fill in blanks, is all. As you said, 'not really a big deal :) .
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Are you ready for the next epsode?
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Now,... onto part 3  :) !
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Your a glutton for punishiment
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Yep! I'm just finishing up re-reading part 2 :). I'm quite eager to read it ^_^ .