Comment on Parasite by Uranium-Sea
This is fantastic. Honestly, I can't think of any significant changes to suggest. It's a little sexy, a little gross, all wrapped up in a feeling of inevitability and loss.
Thanks, that's very sweet. 
Personally I like a mixture of sexy and gross...it makes both things stand out even more when you put them in direct comparison.
Loss is a part of our lives, so I hope I get to keep my memory and this image in my head for as long as possible.
Personally I like a mixture of sexy and gross...it makes both things stand out even more when you put them in direct comparison.
Loss is a part of our lives, so I hope I get to keep my memory and this image in my head for as long as possible.