i really love how you portrayed goku in this - especially his hair! i always have a hard time with his hair ; A;
but you also kept a lot of the key elements and made them your own - like them eyebrows, beautiful!!
i actually like that he has a more mature look, while he is naive i think from time to time goku has shown
that he's "mature". anyway sorry for rambling, i love this piece - not enough goku / chichi love!!