No, no you are right on there are plenty of rough patches which need to be addressed. I appreciate your input! I aim to have her and her bird done first for sure as they are the main focus. I will endeavor to make the rest as detailed as her hair and chest. It gets difficult after a time to see these things when I have been staring at it for so long, which is why a fresh pair of eyes is very helpful for me!
Alright! (just.. the river. there are little scribbles of light blue, taking them out might help XD) You are very welcome, this looks so incredible I think you are sure to place. :3
Oh yes the river needs help, thank you for pointing that out, I will remove those scribbles of light blue, I've written it down, they do stand out. Thank you dear it'll be achievement enough to have this monster finished and detailed. 
If you notice any other things which you feel I should be addressing please don't hesitate to drop more comments, it helps me out a lot! 
If you notice any other things which you feel I should be addressing please don't hesitate to drop more comments, it helps me out a lot! Alright! I will look back everyday to see if my eyes will catch anymore stand-out things :3 You are very welcome 