Comment on The Hunter's Apprentice by figwine
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Dawn: Finally I find you.
Ash: Dawn, How you dare to did with us?
Dawn: Silence, Ketchum! I'm a not more your friend.
Ash: That's can't be happen! You used to be a very kind and caring girl, and you always encouraged me to continue our dreams. The Dawn I knew would never become an ally of Hunter J!
Dawn: Oh yeah? But I have a news for you. That girl is dead! She doesn't exist more. And you'll have a same destiny. Piplup, destroy him!
Ash: I'm sorry. Pikachu, Thunderbolt, Power Up!
(Before this scene, Dawn is kidnapped by J)
Dawn: You again? Let me go! Please!
J: No so fast, little brat. Your Pokémons are so powerful than that Ash Ketchum's pokémon. I need you defeated him.
Dawn: I'm refuse!
J: So I don't have choice. Hypno! (Hypno start hypnotize Dawn) You are one of my henchmen.
Dawn: I'm a one of your henchmen.
J: Ash Ketchum is your enemy.
Dawn: Ash Ketchum is my enemy.
J: You have destroy him and his Pokémons
Dawn: I have destroy him and his Pokémons.
J: Good girl. (She start to laughing evilly).
Ash: Dawn, How you dare to did with us?
Dawn: Silence, Ketchum! I'm a not more your friend.
Ash: That's can't be happen! You used to be a very kind and caring girl, and you always encouraged me to continue our dreams. The Dawn I knew would never become an ally of Hunter J!
Dawn: Oh yeah? But I have a news for you. That girl is dead! She doesn't exist more. And you'll have a same destiny. Piplup, destroy him!
Ash: I'm sorry. Pikachu, Thunderbolt, Power Up!
(Before this scene, Dawn is kidnapped by J)
Dawn: You again? Let me go! Please!
J: No so fast, little brat. Your Pokémons are so powerful than that Ash Ketchum's pokémon. I need you defeated him.
Dawn: I'm refuse!
J: So I don't have choice. Hypno! (Hypno start hypnotize Dawn) You are one of my henchmen.
Dawn: I'm a one of your henchmen.
J: Ash Ketchum is your enemy.
Dawn: Ash Ketchum is my enemy.
J: You have destroy him and his Pokémons
Dawn: I have destroy him and his Pokémons.
J: Good girl. (She start to laughing evilly).
And man, sorry if my dialogue had erros
I means. how do I didn't noticed that?
I hope this make Dawn and Piplup back to normal.
I'm sure it would shock her out of J's thrall.
me too.
Piplup faints!
Ash: I know Hunter J desires my death, but trust me... That ship has long since sailed...