Now that i've finished the chapter, I gotta say this is clever. The characters are true to character, the plot is interesting and exciting, and you've put some interesting threads in there. The art is great too. Don't worry about getting anatomy etc perfect. When you're drawing this much, I'm sure it'll improve with practice. I think you're doing the comic right too, with variety in POVs, different shots, plenty of variety in expressions, it's really good.