taikunfoo's avatar
40 HP and the 2000 points?
taikunfoo's avatar
Awesome, could you please do the HP of this girl in exploring images? :) She has a bonus, as listed on her tracker, so please be sure to include that! 

Blackbird Tracker
+5% Success rate towards Exploration, Spelunking
Tribe Points Catalog

Handler: Archer (anthropomorphic grey tabby w/blue eyes)


Breeding Slots Used: 0
Breeding Slots Promised:
HP:
Hunting/Fishing/Exploring Images:
-10 HP=5(fullbody, colored, shaded, with complex background)+2(handler)+2(fishing)+1(noncommissioned)
-10 HP=5(fullbody, colored, shaded, with complex background)+2(handler)+2(fishing)+1(noncommissioned)
-10 HP=5(fullbody, colored, shaded, with complex background)+2(handler)+2(exploration)+1(noncommissioned)
-8 HP=5(fullbody, colored, shaded, with complex background)+2(exploration)+1(noncommissioned)
Misc. Images:
AoAs:
38/325


And if you'd like another tokota to do them of to make it easier, feel free to toss this girl in as well (they both have the tribe bonus): 

Avgas Tracker
+5% Success rate towards Exploration, Spelunking
Tribe Points Catalog

Handler: Archer (anthropomorphic grey tabby w/blue eyes)


Breeding slots used: 1
Breeding slots promised:
http://comments.deviantart.com/1/613330342/4153407614
http://comments.deviantart.com/1/613330342/4162193328
http://comments.deviantart.com/1/613330342/4155545813
http://comments.deviantart.com/1/613330342/4162149762
http://comments.deviantart.com/1/619577355/4171716096
HP:
Hunting/Fishing/Exploring Images:
-14 HP=6(1278 words)+2(handler)+2(starter)+2(exploration)+2(tribe)
-14 HP=6(1305 words)+2(handler)+2(starter)+2(exploration)+2(tribe)
-12 HP=6(1258 words)+2(handler)+2(exploration)+2(t
Jian89's avatar
Got it done :)

Legend of the white spirit - part 1
13HP each, so 26

Legend of the white spirit - part 2
14HP each, so 28

which makes a 54 in total :XD: always fun when stories carry you away :roll:
Hope you like them :) they are already submitted to the group for rolling ^^
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I enjoyed them, but I did notice some problems with the number of times their names were mentioned as well as gaps where they weren't mentioned for over 300 words, would you mind fixing that up please? :)
Jian89's avatar
I'm sorry, but this took me 3 hours to write all this, giving extra HP then I actualy should ...
I feel bad about that.

All my stories have been accepted like this, i took your and the 3 of mine as most mentioned. I guess those that would have trouble would be the extra Toko's from my side (Tana, ramlah....) which I don't care for ...

So honestly, I am not up to work another hour, rewritting entire parts on a half broken computer (as my hardrive is crashing, this could have been finished 2 days ago if it didn't acted like a flippergame ...)
While it is perfectly fine...

As said, my stories were always accepted before ...
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Having them be accepted into the group and having them be counted by the hierarchy updates people are two different things- rollers for activities do not check to see how many times they are mentioned for the HP count as it is not their job. In the first story, Avgas is mentioned for a section of (generously) 500 words, which is not enough for the exploring bonus, but a handler is present, making that 4 HP for the entire story. Blackbird is fine, earning the entire 13 HP, for a total of 17 HP for the first story. The second story is better, with a rough 1000 words for Avgas, though still not enough for the exploring bonus, but again, a handler is present, making a total of 7 HP for the story. Blackbird is another 1000 words, so 7 HP total, and the total would be 14 HP for the second story, giving you a total of leaving you short (current total is 31 HP) ^^' As I have been playing for over a year, and have submitted many tokotas for hierarchy updates, I am familiar with how the mods count HP. If you'd like, I'd be happy to ask one to take a brief look over the two stories and see what they say about the HP count.

I would like to clarify that I am not asking you to rewrite the entire story, but simply add their names in a few more times so the stories can count for the full amount of HP, as I really enjoy what you have written and I appreciate the amount of work that has gone into them.
Jian89's avatar
I'll see what I can do, but I hope you can wait a few days then?
In the next 3 days, I am barely gonna have computer acces (and not gonna do it by phone :roll:)
If I can't do it tomorriw, then it's earliest gonna be thursday that I can do anything ...
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Alright, will see what I can come up with ^^
taikunfoo's avatar
Great, how long will it take you to complete the images?
Jian89's avatar
Would be literature ^^; (as said before :p )

Gonna depend on my schedule this week. I am in the middle of a house moving and my furniture arrives Friday ... and we are still painting ^^;
plus I have 11 pups to take care of and need to go to work.
if I use the two Toko's in 1 story, I can get it done within 2 stories I think ... SO Maybe a week?
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Yeah that works fine, I'll mark you down for a due date of 7/21/16 (week from today's date since I took a while getting back to you)