vigour-mortis's avatar
This was absolutely wonderful. It felt like a departure from your usual style, but then I read the last line ;) I really enjoyed reading this. The details were just enough, and the tone was just right.
SCFrankles's avatar
I'm really pleased you thought the tone was right. This is quite different from my usual stuff but when I was writing it I felt pretty confident about it - I felt like I knew what I was doing.

Thank you so much ^_^ 
vigour-mortis's avatar
You obviously knew what you were doing, and then some! Loved it!