>is the use of in-world terms,

Yeah. :\ That's a tricky one. You can frontload it and overwhelm your reader or try to subtly weave it into the narrative and hope they're able to get it. If I don't end up lighting it on fire, that's something I might have to finagle.

>I can't read it all right now (work looming), but I'm off tomorow.  Will give you a full impressions list when I'm finished.

No prob. No rush. I appreciate any feedback you can give.