Tinselfire's avatar
And that, you certainly succeeded - although I cannot tell for certain if the vision is the same as the impression, do get a very clear sense of meter and intonation.

If you trust I mean only praise in saying so, can well imagine this read in a computerized voice. Neither the stereotypical computer voice of popular culture nor modern semi-natural speech synthesis, but the tenebrous, musical voices of Isao Tomita and his Holst interpretations. Especially the form adapted for the computer chatter which opens the dialogue of Alien - the formatting seems a dear relative of readouts of data streams of the time.
I would not mind one bit seeing this read out as a demo on an Amiga 1000.

Well done.

By the way, you name seems familiar, as if I have seen it recently.
Say, do you like anthro canids? Canids in crowns?
DogmaticKerr's avatar
Thank you! I am sure that it's not - it's always up for interpretation, but I prefer it infinitely over plain old block stanzas :D

Of course I do! Even without further context - which makes me blush - I'd love the reading in that way because I'm quite the analytical and measured sort ;D

:bow:

I'm actually quite fond of anthros, though this seems quite specific - anthropomorphic canids in rows doesn't ring a bell, but certainly sounds intriguing.
Tinselfire's avatar
Ah! That is great to hear, and let me jog your memory.
When you find the chance, do have a look in my favourites folder.
DogmaticKerr's avatar
Ahhhh! BJPentecost! :love: I love and adore her work! ;D Thank you for jogging my memory, I can't believe it didn't occur to me! ^^;