Fangirl-Shenanigans's avatar
This is a lovely piece. I like the detail and that the colors aren't too bright but just right. I still haven't started reading the Children of Hurin (haven't had time but I have it somewhere). The only issue I have is that the brother aren't looking at the same thing, which is just a tad distracting. I think lowering the iris in the archer's eye so it's looking where the brother is looking would have made it better.

That said, this is a great piece and I hope you are proud of it.
FrerinHagsolb's avatar
Hey, thank you so much for the detailed feedback, it's really important to me! I'll have a look concerning the iris...It's just a bit difficult, because he has to look in the same direction in which the arrow points...But I'll try to figure out a better possibility!