Eternal-Shadow-S's avatar
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Well, it's pretty good. The linework is decent and you've managed to get a really good pose. The figure on the character's very well done and if you're going for an enticing look, well I suppose job well done. Now, the colors could use a little more improvement. It's not bad, the choice of colors are good and you've managed to make do well with the shadows. The lighting also gives a nice sort of shiny look around the body, and you've also put a few nice pinkish shades on parts of the body.

So why does the color need improvement a bit? Well, regarding the pink shades, it's only placed on select parts of the body. Nothing is wrong with that, but I feel you could put some other shades also on parts of the body. Doesn't have to be obvious, but adding really light shades would actually help make this stand out a bit more, because although the colors are good, it is still quite flat. 

Overall, this is pretty good. The image and colors are done fairly well, and I'd suggest adding a bit more shades and tones on the image to really make it stand out. Keep it up!
TheGildoe's avatar
Thank you and thanks for the tips I'll try that next time!