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Well, it's pretty good. The linework is decent and you've managed to get a really good pose. The figure on the character's very well done and if you're going for an enticing look, well I suppose job well done. Now, the colors could use a little more improvement. It's not bad, the choice of colors are good and you've managed to make do well with the shadows. The lighting also gives a nice sort of shiny look around the body, and you've also put a few nice pinkish shades on parts of the body.
So why does the color need improvement a bit? Well, regarding the pink shades, it's only placed on select parts of the body. Nothing is wrong with that, but I feel you could put some other shades also on parts of the body. Doesn't have to be obvious, but adding really light shades would actually help make this stand out a bit more, because although the colors are good, it is still quite flat.
Overall, this is pretty good. The image and colors are done fairly well, and I'd suggest adding a bit more shades and tones on the image to really make it stand out. Keep it up!