Comment on (Updated) Charmines [Species Info] by Pyro-Zombie
Feel free to use the few corrections I made. Or not, that is fine too XD
Story and Behavior
Charmines are mystical creatures with the ability to grant good luck or bad luck to others. Not much is known about who created them but it's said that they were created out of an act of of mercy to help people in hard times. Bringing good luck to the good or punishing bad people by causing bad luck.
Despite the fact that they were created to help others, these little guys are known for their mischievous behavior, as they are aware of how valuable their ability is and know that they can take advantage of it. For this reason, they usually set conditions, or demand something in exchange for their abilities. Most commonly they ask for gifts, usually things that they like (food, toys, money, etc) or things with a great sentimental value. Sometimes instead of asking for things in return they put conditions on how to manage the luck they give, as they consider it to make things more fun and interesting
In some cases, they may get attached to a person enough to offer them their abilities without expecting anything in return, this may also happen if they feel they owe something to the person
There are three types of Charmines:
> Good Charm: The most common type, these are Charmines with the ability to grant only good luck
> Bad Charm: The uncommon type, Charmines with the ability to grant only bad luck. They're Charmines that were cursed and due to this, their Charm has been corrupted. They always have Colored Sclera but do not always have horns, however the chances of them to having horns is higher than the other types
> Demi Charm: The rare type, these are Charmines with the ability to grant either good or bad luck, but unlike the Bad Charm type, they're not under the influence of a curse and instead they were created to have both abilities. They always have Colored Sclera in one eye and usually some type of Halo, they have a bigger chance to have wings than the other types.
Charm is the name of Charmines ability to generate luck. When using their ability they create an "amulet" that will transfer the Charm to the target as long as they're in contact with it. This amulet shares the shape of the Charmine's tail but is smaller and can be carried as some sort of accessory (keychain, earring, toy, etc) by the person. Once the effect of the Charm is over the amulet disappears and the Charmine will have to wait around 5-10 hours before they are able to generate a new one
> For Good Charm, the person carrying the amulet will have good luck until the Charm is over
> For Bad Charm, the person carrying the amulet will be able to cause bad luck to a specific person until the Charm is over
> For Demi Charm, the person carrying the amulet will experience both effects of the Charm until it's over
For the Charm to take effect, the person must be in contact with the amulet. So if they lose it they won't be able to use the ability, also, if another person takes the amulet or steals it they'll be able to use the ability themselves.
Note: There are a lot of mutations but this does not necessarily mean they'll be almost impossible to get, I'll try to make them moderately accessible in some way ouo
Charmines may have several styles of ears and their length may vary as well
Their tails may have different lengths
The base of the tail may have different fur styles, add-ons, and even be made of different substances such as fire, water, glass, etc
They may have different fur styles as well as being made of different materials such as fabric, wax, leaves, etc
They may have multiple tails. The amount of tails they have determines how powerful they are. 3 being the maximum number of tails and thus, the most powerful. This power translates into how many time they can maintain the effect of their abilities while these are affecting a target which may last from some minutes to a full day depending on how powerful they are
Floral tail is a trait in which their tails are made of, or contain flowers or other types of vegetation on them. This may range from it being made of leaves, being a flower/plant or having leaves/petals or other type of vegetation growing from/attached to these
Fabric tail is a trait in which their tails are made or contains fabric on them, the fabric style, length and designs may vary, as well as have accessories attached to them
Object tail is a trait in which their tails are an object instead of a regular tail
Mimicry is a trait in which their tails have the shape of a creature for camouflage purposes. The carnivorous plant tail is a mix between the floral and the mimicry tail trait
They usually take this appearance to try to fit with humans or other humanoid beings, this appearance may be more anthro or kemonomimi looking. In this form they can be small like a little plushie keychain or they can also be as big as a human
Their face shape may vary as well as their eyes, mouth, and overall facial features, they also may or may not have a nose
They don't have a wide range of abilities but they can do a lot of things by manipulating luck and being creative
will check it out and edit the text later today, thank you so much for taking the time to do this ;v;/