Hahahaha no worries, perhaps you should have, but we can now chat it out
Oh! Now I get it... HAHAHAHA Shortened stubs xDDD C'mon,you've done pretty good, true it can be improved but the idea is clear.. I think your most terrible mistake would be her hand drawn backwards, you see, the thumb area should go exactly at the opposite end
Apart from that, I would point proportions, but it's common mistakes, we all have them
I'm working on a redlining, hope it becomes useful