falcoDArgento's avatar
Hi ther! What exactly do you mean by “remove”? To erase?

And what kind of expression do you want her to have?
Noxiouschocolate-3's avatar
I probably should have edited my description XD
well i'd like the hands to look like actual hands instead of rather shortened stubs. as for her facial expression i'd like her to look mischievous with her smile looking more like a smirk.
falcoDArgento's avatar
Hahahaha no worries, perhaps you should have, but we can now chat it out

Oh! Now I get it... HAHAHAHA Shortened stubs xDDD C'mon,you've done pretty good, true it can be improved but the idea is clear.. I think your most terrible mistake would be her hand drawn backwards, you see, the thumb area should go exactly at the opposite end
Apart from that, I would point proportions, but it's common mistakes, we all have them

I'm working on a redlining, hope it becomes useful