Actually, I like it a lot it just needs a hard brush in a few places to define better some parts of the outside of the arms and legs. The top of the left arm and right side the right leg then it's fabulous. It's a unique vision definitely worth a 5-minute revision.
Thanks Arthur! But what do you mean with "hard"? Hard edge?
Look at the outside edge of the two arms one is much sharper than the other same with the legs.
Yes I understand what you mean now. The whole body is rather sketchy (the hands are the only more polished part, because they would draw most attention) and the anatomy is a little off too, because the painting was more like a try to see if the concept, light, shadows and so on would work. I will definitely spend more time on the next one.
Yes it rocks would make a great T shirt or logo for a band
I can't type sorry I revised it. A fairly low opacity brush hard bristles over the top of the left arm and the outside of the right leg to make those lines sharper.
Actually one elbow is kinda missing 