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1. When the doctor used Tammy's fetishes to disarm her before infecting her with the parasite.
2. I like two a ton, where the original personality is barely recognizable but corrupted through a lens of control. And 'C' where the Parasite grows into the host, especially if there are visible effects. (Tabico's "Pierced" comes to mind.)
3. I wished that the parasites had survived in some capacity outside of being bred by the HIVE (though genetic editing by the HIVE or selective breeding could be a cool direction to take that.)
4. Just how comfortable is Tammy with taking this submission thing? Is it gonna come back to bite her? What are HIVE's plans for core?
5. The effects and appearances of the parasite were top notch
6. I like the idea of biological third parties interfering with this shadow war. They often have different strategies than CORE or HIVE and it's interesting to see how they mesh (and hot of course)
7. the HIVE's entrenchment in the school, what other R&D are they working on, other types of drones, how kinky CORE is going to get as time goes on.
8. 75-100 pages sounds about good.