Comment on Truth by yuumei

NasikaSakura's avatar
Yay! New characters! 
I must say, something feels too rigid about this paint-over though, especially in the viewer's left arm and the curvature of the spine. The hair also feels super-imposed on the head, especially on its upper two thirds. Of course, with practice, these things should resolve. ^^ this is a new technique you are working with. 
I like that you are trying to add in your use and understanding of light, as evident with the right of the hair. I feel like the understanding you have of reflected colors is lacking in this one. Just a little bit more on the grayed jacket would likely help make it feel like your art again in my opinion. Looking forward to the new comics, Miss Yuumei! Good luck with this new step in your journey!