Nice lineart but I do say you work on your proportions, compared to the body the arm is way too short. The waist seems a little too skinny or the hips are too wide but that's mainly because of my preference. This is a great first start though and I see a great future to come.
Thank you very much! I've always had trouble with proportions lmao. And the skinny waist/wide hips were intentional.
Your welcome! The skinny waist and the wide hips just don't really appeal to the style I'm used to, but I do understand that you were probably going for a popular 30's cartoon style. And you definitely don't have to change it.
I completely understand that, we all have our different preferences! ^_^