Comment on mercy 55- 63 by Stjepan-Sejic
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Mmh 
rereading mercy from the start, the transition between the previous panel (with Anne) to this one feels a bit off compared to other transitions you usually make (guess the switching from one narrator to the next without yet some kind of stitching between the pages gives this impression). I guess this'll be fixed when you'll arrange the pages in the end
(in contrast, the fade to black transition between alan and anne's POV at the end of part 2 of this strip is really a genius touch
)
rereading mercy from the start, the transition between the previous panel (with Anne) to this one feels a bit off compared to other transitions you usually make (guess the switching from one narrator to the next without yet some kind of stitching between the pages gives this impression). I guess this'll be fixed when you'll arrange the pages in the end (in contrast, the fade to black transition between alan and anne's POV at the end of part 2 of this strip is really a genius touch
)