Comment on Character Variations by ebbewaxin
OHHHH But I KNOW what this is 
Hehehe i'm not sure i will do the version i showed you. I took your advice and am looking it over once more. ^^
I am glad to hear this, because the story and art are excellent you just want to get to those places a bit faster
Yeah i hear ya, i think i will change some things in the beginning, but the rest kind of needs a little slower pace to get the reader to catch up with everything that is happening and understand it.
I may also change some world stuff that would certain story elements easier.
But, we will see....
I have a couple of different stories written, that i can also do.. ^^
I may also change some world stuff that would certain story elements easier.
But, we will see....
I have a couple of different stories written, that i can also do.. ^^
Alright if I can help more, let me know 
I will probably do some changes and then i can send you the revised version ^^
That sounds great Ebbe. I know you can do this dude!
Hehehe thnx ^^