I like that you kept that fun bit of narrative in, but I was hoping to see sort of an excited look on Tink's face, like that of an eager kid about to babble on and on about something interesting they found.  Still, it's a great illustration of the story, as always.
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I always felt she'd go straight into the drama here, so I chose to keep her more serious, especially given Peter's reaction.