:giggles: All I ask is that you tell me what you think.
Tell you what I think?? Hmm. . . I don't think I'll be able to fit it all in here. [[It's all good, don't worry.]]
Let's just put it this way: Your story? It killed my Puck and Clopin story dead. I had a little spark of idea. . . then I found yours and it crushed it. Be proud! [[No, i'm serious. Be proud. It takes some skills to kill an idea of mine, but you'll just push me harder to get mine done.]]
Oh, yea! KEEP WRITITNG!!! ^__^
Let's just put it this way: Your story? It killed my Puck and Clopin story dead. I had a little spark of idea. . . then I found yours and it crushed it. Be proud! [[No, i'm serious. Be proud. It takes some skills to kill an idea of mine, but you'll just push me harder to get mine done.]]
Oh, yea! KEEP WRITITNG!!! ^__^
Despite the fact that the "Cluck" is a side-story in the tale?To be quite honest, when has that ever mattered?
But yes, I realize it is a side story, but your main one is FANSTASTIC, reguardless. You had a great idea, and you ran like a mofo with it. It will serve you well to keep this whole thing going.
Hell, I keep telling people to read your story, just because it's such and oddball, off the wall, and brilliant thing! Seriously, though, where the hell did you come up with the idea of the Mary Sues taking over the fandoms? The obscene amounts of them in the internet?
But yes, I realize it is a side story, but your main one is FANSTASTIC, reguardless. You had a great idea, and you ran like a mofo with it. It will serve you well to keep this whole thing going.
Hell, I keep telling people to read your story, just because it's such and oddball, off the wall, and brilliant thing! Seriously, though, where the hell did you come up with the idea of the Mary Sues taking over the fandoms? The obscene amounts of them in the internet?
It was mostly inspired by the obscene amounts of Mary Sues, but also inspired by the actions of the PPC, the Protectors of the Plot Continum. They were an anti-Sue group that was going strong for a while but has kinda died off (as far as I can tell). I decided I wanted to tell the story from a canon character's POV, how did they feel about Mary Sues? How did Sues affect them? Because every other anti-Sue story I've read was from an outsider's POV: a PPC agent's story or the story of a girl who hates sues that was sucked into the fandom with one. Because, to me, those stories are sometimes just as bad as the Sue itself.
I can see how that would be. Yes. *nods*
As to the PPC... perhaps the Sues got to them first. They didn't taper off, they got killed off. *Dramatic music* Oh noes! By revealing their secret, I think I'm not targeted!
XD Stupid Mary Sues.
In any case, I think the way you're doing the OC's POV is pretty good. Keep going, and I'll keep waiting for the installments! ^_^
As to the PPC... perhaps the Sues got to them first. They didn't taper off, they got killed off. *Dramatic music* Oh noes! By revealing their secret, I think I'm not targeted!
XD Stupid Mary Sues.
In any case, I think the way you're doing the OC's POV is pretty good. Keep going, and I'll keep waiting for the installments! ^_^