Comment on Tutorial: Beautiful Eyes 101 by vanity-insecurity

Thank you ~vanity-insecurity ! Amazing tutorial. Really learned me a lot.
I tried to apply your tutorial as much as possible on the practice image. Here is my outcome:
[link] (links to Tinypic.com)

I did some extra things, such as giving the veins in the eye their colors back.
My actual goal was to create a bit of a Vampiric eye, I think I could do better but for a first try?

~yudiyannovaera