Comment on Trapped in a Dream, pg1 by EmperorDinobot
If I might be honest.
These are quite rough. In some areas, you've got a good idea, it's just not getting executed properly.
One of the biggest problems I see, is no gutters between panels. All of the panels butt-up against each other and it's kind of confusing to the eye.
You've got good character designs but the characters need some anatomy work. Though me criticizing anatomy issues is really the pot calling the kettle black
On the very plus-side. It's nice to see you drawing something other than side view dinosaurs.
These are quite rough. In some areas, you've got a good idea, it's just not getting executed properly.
One of the biggest problems I see, is no gutters between panels. All of the panels butt-up against each other and it's kind of confusing to the eye.
You've got good character designs but the characters need some anatomy work. Though me criticizing anatomy issues is really the pot calling the kettle black
On the very plus-side. It's nice to see you drawing something other than side view dinosaurs.
Shut up. It's supposed to be this way.
Easy, I'm just trying to help.
