Comment on Gifts by FugueState

orientalbunny's avatar
i see you give as much thought and care with words as you do with your V art. I found myself admiring a few of your sentences - "All he could do was rely on the inertia of plans already made to pull him forward, even though he knew it wasn't enough." < I particularly liked that one;
and the imagery of him first being led by Evey down the gallery and then they are side by side. like companions in battle. I really like this story and i'm so impressed with how you handles both V and Evey' emotions, allowing them to grow and heal. Thank you for sharing. :)
FugueState's avatar
Thank you very much :thanks: I'm extremely glad this one seems to have turned out so well! :blushes:
babblingbrookebutler's avatar
dude i'm totally loving you rightnow like omg i am so jealous of evey!
FugueState's avatar
Heh - I wouldn't be too jealous! A relationship with V isn't exactly the standard "hearts and flowers" fare... xD
babblingbrookebutler's avatar
i know but still god he is awsome!!!!:kiss: