- In the Akatsuki or even worse is when they are not in Akatsuki but they are with someone who is
- Being an Uchiha
- Being an Uzumaki is starting to bother me because there are starting to be a lot of them
- When they are with a dead character (and I think if they die then you need to fix that in your OC's info)
- Overly angsty past that no one would be able to survive but they somehow did with no explanation
- Don't look like they belong in the Naruto-verse
- Overpowered for no reason (for example being Jounin level when they are only academy age)
Basically stuff that doesn't line up physically, mentally, age-wise, or story-wise... And you're typical Mary-Sue traits
- Being an Uchiha
- Being an Uzumaki is starting to bother me because there are starting to be a lot of them
- When they are with a dead character (and I think if they die then you need to fix that in your OC's info)
- Overly angsty past that no one would be able to survive but they somehow did with no explanation
- Don't look like they belong in the Naruto-verse
- Overpowered for no reason (for example being Jounin level when they are only academy age)
Basically stuff that doesn't line up physically, mentally, age-wise, or story-wise... And you're typical Mary-Sue traits
I agree on everything you said...
And for the uzumaki part, it annoys me if they live in Kohona during Naruto's timeline and know they are uzumaki and have their last name. Wouldn't that be confusing for Naruto?
And for the uzumaki part, it annoys me if they live in Kohona during Naruto's timeline and know they are uzumaki and have their last name. Wouldn't that be confusing for Naruto?
I can see how it would be confusing for him. The only Uzumaki he knows is himself and his parents and then all of a sudden someone else pops up with the same last night as him... Which I especially can't stand: when they are a sibling of Naruto or Sasuke 