Comment on Rate my Artwork. I will rate yours. by GBSartworks

Oct 12, 2018

My rate for yours: 8
I'm not very good at rate and critique, it's look fine. Beautiful work, i see the dedication when you draw it.
And some people critique about your's background, well i agree with them. It's a bit difficult to distinguish between background and the character.

This is mine:

GBSartworks

Edited Oct 12, 2018

ahhh alas,...some kind of art im looking for. for me this is a solid 7.5 or probably almost 8. i love the pose, the chibis and the dragon BG. the coloring is nice as well specially the transition of color gradients.. the only problem i had was a bit on the face. its not bad but its mediocre. but overall i like this one.
watching you now.. hoping to see more improvement from you

Byuha

Oct 12, 2018

Thank you very much, i am satisfied with your rate.
Looking forward for it

GBSartworks

Oct 12, 2018

if i would redraw the face and hair it would somehow look like these. add a bit more of hair strand and more flow on the hair. and somehow edit the face a bit and add more eyelashes.. but still you did a good job.

Byuha

Oct 12, 2018

i dowloaded it, thanks.

AngelKite

Oct 13, 2018

I prefer your version of the face more, it’s a subjective thing! Has a softer and more RPG feel imo
really nice piece ^^

Byuha

Oct 13, 2018

aaa-aa--aaanu, sshankyu very much,
I don't know what have to say, when I read the kind comments from Senpai like these.
I know you said subjective thing, cause related with style. GBSartworks has good technique for redraw it with his style too.
well I said thank you again.

no problem ^^

yup you have a point as well, her version looks more younger and more innocent looking, mine looks more a bit of an adult