Good stuff, Leigh! Strong inks and pencils. Pages can get a little cluttered and the colors are sometimes redundant with the inks. (For example, when you render tonally by hatch, X-hatch, contour hatch . . . that is to say, hatch . . . you can get away with simpler colors, like flat washes. If you grade them tonally to show the lighting, it's doing what the inks do, so the look can be busy, conflicted, or over-wrought. Complex inks -> simple color; simple inks -> complex color. For what it may be worth.
GO BUG MAN!