HoremWeb's avatar
I must agree with Dasha, and add that the composition is wrong in a disturbing way, and the depth of field is too shallow. To make the latter even worse, the hyperfocal point is too close and the actual theme of the picture slips out from the viewers' mental focus.

I think the composition issue is not so self-explanatory… A structure like this has a direction, it has a "face" and it "looks" somewhere. In this instance, it looks upwards to the zenith. But you placed the "head" part to the top third and put the dull and not exactly pretty stem into the main role. There is even a lighter field above the thing that makes the already unbalanced sight less stable, that could have been avoided by recomposing and chosing a lower angle, etc.

I really hope this opinion helps you for the future. Please don't dismay and don't feel hurt, but feel free to send another, more stunning image :)