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Here is the first chapter of the Hellsing story again, completely corected and without any spelling or grammer erros. Please read it again and if you want to lat a fave and a comment I would really apresate it, thank you.

Here's the link of the chapter: Four loves of the night (Part 1)
It was an ordinary dark night in a forest area of London. The moon painted in red, brightly lighting the dark night sky. It wasn't a good time for the world, especially for the people of London, to move safely since the ghouls and vampires were circulating out, hungry for human flesh and blood. Deep inside the forest, a young 16-year-old girl was getting rid of the hungry ghouls who have surrounded her for a long time, smelling the fresh blood that has leaked from the wound she had acquired on the right side of her waist before she managed to escape and run away form her cruel and distrustful father. But it seemed that luck wasn't on her side as the ghouls were catching up to her and minutes were passing like seconds. Cabryella was running as fast as her feet could take her. Suddenly, she tripped over a small rock in front of her, making her fall to the cold, hard ground. Now the ghouls were right in front of her. Her eyes widened. 'This is it, is this my end?' She thought as she saw t